CCC- DRAFTS,
UNFINISHED- From Just Starte to Lay-Away
NOTES- PARASCOPIC
PARACOSMIC REVIEW
July 5-2024I've read it many times, but it's about time I got back to your blog.
What I like about your writing is that it's fresh and alive, it draws me along. Whatever the subject I'm interested in it. There's a gentle mix of satire and sarcasm you use as a humorous mix. No jokes, just something wry you weave slyly into your works.
It's not your worry if they look in the mirror, it's nice if they do. Poets write mirrors mostly for themselves anyway.
I'm losing my analogy and my chai is cold again.
I'm sure you already know the direction of your poetry has evolved intentionally or not and maybe due to the geopolitical times you are more aware of. The new work is more harshly sarcastic, nearly sardonic, or slightly negative, or whatever. I don't think the MAGA folks will like it. Don't know if they did.
I don't think you intended these as your most charming pieces. You never sugarcoat your words but you always use them effectively, this time more fiercely. The little poems get by without comment- they are fine and good, but the blurry one, is that an artistic statement?
I've finally somewhat caught up with this blog stuff I've been so busy with (although I'm sure much less so than you) with blog prep, blog writing, and blah blah. India is pending and Nalini's work is extremely busy. So I get to help out more than usual with scheduling Reyn for the vet and taking on the 18th. Getting special shots to travel for myself, all of these things like that.
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NOTES BEFORE INDIAN TRAVELS
Morning Chai (should I collect these)
I've finally somewhat caught up with all of this blog stuff I've been busy with my silly blog stuff, though much less busy than Nalini and her work at WIC.
India is calling and though she is halfway across the world is sooner than we think. With Nalini filling in for her staff who is enjoying this long weekend I get to help out with duties more than usual.
Reyn is reluctant to see us go and hasn't cooperated even to schedule updating her insurance or making a check-up appointment at the vet. This reminds me, I need special export shots to get out of here. All of these details prove how practical a partner is.
But it does make me wish I were someone like Joseph Conrad slipping off to the Heart of Darkness. People just got up and went in those days. It may have taken them months, but the tale was in the telling if you got back.
Maybe not Joe. I'm better on the lighter side, I should pack my bags and catch a steamer, go on the lecture circuit like my main man Mr. Clemens!
Happy Fourth of July everyone, let's hope we're coming back to somewhere wonderful!
Samual Clemans
>> Evergram-marnotely- Santa Fe
>> Evergram-marnotely
Today, while touching up and moving files and paragraphs on Evernote the relevant text went completely bonkers, combining words and phrases in crazy unreadable ways. I even tried restarting my laptop twice hoping to self-correct. I finally just closed up shop and went home. This wasn't the first time, or was it the only platform this has happened with.
I am too deliberate a person (read that as old) to do anything on the fly. This has been a personal trait ever since my collage/college days (sic), and even before MacApples and PC's came to be. But I digress. Sometime in the recent past l have written short pieces reviewing Grammarly and Evernote, each well before they became tainted by AI. I rated them both high- practical and useful.
I believe the current editions of these apps will evolve as root programs of 'HAL-2000 (the computer that tragically malfunctioned in '2001 A Space Oddity'). I certainly would not praise either as glowingly as in my original reviews. Were I to, and I may yet, return to evaluating such things I would rate them both just adequate and predisposed to hindering and interfering with one's work.
But, to be honest, I still use them in place of Word or other formal software products, but only reluctantly, and mostly out of habit. I now lack the time, patience, and incentive to learn new things that will be updated or outdated or no longer be free before I master them. Of course I lacked the same traits when computers evolved from video games.
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Today, while touching up and moving files and paragraphs on Evernote the relevant text went completely bonkers, combining words and phrases in crazy unreadable ways. I even tried restarting my laptop twice hoping to self-correct. I finally just closed up shop and went home. This wasn't the first time, or was it the only platform this has happened with.
I am too deliberate a person (read as old) to do anything on the fly. This has been a personal trait ever since my collage/college days (sic), and even before MacApples and PC's came to be. But I digress. Sometime in the recent past l have written short pieces reviewing Grammarly and Evernote, each well before they became tainted by AI. I rated them both high- practical and useful.
I believe the current editions of these apps will evolve as root programs of 'HAL-2000 (the computer that tragically malfunctioned in '2001 A Space Oddity'). I certainly would not praise either as glowingly as in my original reviews. Were I to, and I may yet, return to evaluating such things I would rate them both just adequate and predisposed to hindering and interfering with one's work.
But, to be honest, I still use them in place of Word or other formal software products, but only reluctantly, and mostly out of habit. I now lack the time, patience, and incentive to learn new things that will be updated or outdated or no longer be free before I master them. Of course I lacked the same traits when computers evolved from video games.
-dp-
-11-18-24
The Continuous Adventures of Dirty Socks: Book Eleven, Chapter 5 (wip)
1. first entry (alexandria) -wip-
NEW WRITE
I was on deck when dawn morning sun rose, a blurry silver disk low in the east. It was cool and damp. I was still in my light bedclothes but wanted to be on deck to look about and to check the anchor rode. I also wanted to sweep the deck clear of the tacks I'd scattered around before bedding down last night and place them back into their little storage tin to take below. Besides, these were practical tasks until the chai came to a boil on the little safety burner below.
The tacks were an old trick Josh Slocum had passed on to my grandfather for when those cruising alone in aboriginal waters. It turns out that bare feet are susceptible to sudden and intense pain when punctured by tacks, which will induce screams followed by splashing and cries in the water when a deck tack is encountered at night. It works as a superior alarm to gunfire in most locations.
When I finally had a few moments to settle back against the cockpit rail and reflect on what brought me to this morning anchored safe distance in the lee of this small presumably mostly uncharted island a few miles southwest of Madagascar. Today marks the first full day and first official log entry of my first real command. Though I sail alone I am still in command of a 32-foot sloop-rigged ketch, and though I feel competent that I will master her, the Indian Ocean shall be a daunting place to be learning her lines.
This is another reason I'm choosing to linger here, lay-by-and-by on anchor, enjoy these slow final sips of chai and just lay back and enjoy this warming morning sun atop the cabin top. Soon enough the breeze will freshen, I'll choose a conservative headsail, likely the heavy 110 jib, set the main for full, but ready for an early afternoon reef. This will be my first real real passage aboard 'Nalini'. Bless us all that the Good Lord can muster, for after all, He knows of the misfortune and torment that brought me from Oakland to wherever He chooses to lead me now.
I was about to roll myself over from the cabin top and plop back down to the deck when something suddenly plopped firmly and landed squarely on the center of my chest. It didn't land hard, like rock or hunk of wood, it felt more like a sail bag, or twenty-foot coil of rope. Still, it knocked the breath out of me, stopped my heart, and then caused it to race with in fight or flight surge of adrenaline. I hadn't felt this way since falling from the upper spreaders of 'Uncle Robert's 60-foot foot-racing sloop 'Orion'.
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Being the lightest person onboard I was asked, not ordered, to be hoisted up the might 'Orion's" mast on a spare halyard to free the spinnaker which had wrapped around the spreader but the shackle I was attached to failed. I free-fell forty feet, just missing the deck, most of me splashed into the water and scraping along next to the speeding yacht. Most of me, except my right forearm, which glanced the starboard gunnel broke with enough sound for the entire crew to hear. My uncle was over the side directly with a flotation device attached to a length of line uncoiling behind him. He was with me in the water before I even knew what had happened;
In the same instant the Mate, Bill, took the wheel and command of 'Orion'. The crew, all old hands, and old friends acted expeditiously and as one performing their man-over-board protocol. I was rescued and aboard before I really knew what had happened. Once below deck a crude splint was carefully applied to my arm and some rum was carefully administered for my pain. Two trusted mates stood by to tend to my every need, after all, I was only fourteen, and the captain's niece.
Meanwhile, above deck, the men were racing to head up and reach back up through The Gate and across the Bay cutting in front of Alcatraz towards City to make better time. The crew was uncharacteristically late in dropping 'Orion's sails at Hyde Street Pier which they figured was nearest to Saint Francis Hospital. Both the ship and the pier were badly damaged before we were tied up, but I was already placed on a rickshaw and on my way up the hill through Chinatown to the hospital by then.
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But this thing that has landed on my chest seemed not only soft, but warm, and now that I've calmed down, I can tell that it's breathing! Oh, god, It's an animal! What kind of animals live at sea? Could it have been trapped on board all this time? Had it come over on the tender? But wait, it was purring, and I felt sharp pin-like or maybe tack-like pricks in my chest. I raised my head and a cat was staring down at me, looking as though he, or she, had just conquered me.
Being startled I rolled from the cabin cabin top giving this stray cat just enough time to dig its rear paws into my belly and leap to the deck in front of me. The cat sat there, looking up at me, tail sweeping back and forth across the deck. I just look down at this cat, hands on my hips bewildered. How could this be? This cat looked exactly like my recently murdered father's cat, Dirty Socks. His father had an identical cat of the same name.
Could the all be from a long line of mousers?
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I was on deck when dawn morning sun rose, a blurry silver disk low in the east. It was cool and damp. I was still in my light bedclothes but wanted to be on deck to look about and to check the anchor rode. I also wanted to sweep the deck clear of the tacks I'd scattered around before bedding down last night and place them back into their little storage tin to take below. Besides, these were practical tasks until the chai came to a boil on the little safety burner below.
The tacks were an old trick Josh Slocum had passed on to my grandfather for when those cruising alone in aboriginal waters. It turns out that bare feet are susceptible to sudden and intense pain when punctured by tacks, which will induce screams followed by splashing and cries in the water when a deck tack is encountered at night. It works as a superior alarm to gunfire in most locations.
When I finally had a few moments to settle back against the cockpit rail and reflect on what brought me to this morning anchored safe distance in the lee of this small presumably mostly uncharted island a few miles southwest of Madagascar. Today marks the first full day and first official log entry of my first real command. Though I sail alone I am still in command of a 32-foot sloop-rigged ketch, and though I feel competent that I will master her, the Indian Ocean shall be a daunting place to be learning her lines.
This is another reason I'm choosing to linger here, lay-by-and-by on anchor, enjoy these slow final sips of chai and just lay back and enjoy this warming morning sun atop the cabin top. Soon enough the breeze will freshen, I'll choose a conservative headsail, likely the heavy 110 jib, set the main for full, but ready for an early afternoon reef. This will be my first real real passage aboard 'Nalini'. Bless us all that the Good Lord can muster, for after all, He knows of the misfortune and torment that brought me from Oakland to wherever He chooses to lead me now.
I was about to roll myself over from the cabin top and plop back down to the deck when something suddenly plopped firmly and landed squarely on the center of my chest. It didn't land hard, like rock or hunk of wood, it felt more like a sail bag, or twenty-foot coil of rope. Still, it knocked the breath out of me, stopped my heart, and then caused it to race with in fight or flight surge of adrenaline. I hadn't felt this way since falling from the upper spreaders of 'Uncle Robert's 60-foot foot-racing sloop 'Orion'.
~~~
I was asked to be hoisted up the mast on a spare halyard to free the spinnaker which had wrapped around the spreader but the shackle I was attached to failed. I free-fell forty feet, just missing the deck, most of me splashed into the water and scraping along next to the speeding yacht. Most of me, except my right forearm, which glanced the starboard gunnel broke with enough sound for the entire crew to hear. My uncle was over the side directly with a flotation device attached to a length of line uncoiling behind him. He was with me in the water before I even knew what had happened;
In the same instant the Mate, Bill, took the wheel and command of 'Orion'. The crew, all old hands, and old friends acted expeditiously and as one performing their man-over-board protocol. I was rescued and aboard before I really knew what had happened. Once below deck a crude splint was carefully applied to my arm and some rum was carefully administered for my pain. Two trusted mates stood by to tend to my every need, after all, I was only fourteen, and the captain's niece.
Meanwhile, above deck, the men were racing to head up and reach back up through The Gate and across the Bay cutting in front of Alcatraz towards City to make better time. The crew was uncharacteristically late in dropping 'Orion's sails at Hyde Street Pier which they figured was nearest to Saint Francis Hospital. Both the ship and the pier were badly damaged before we were tied up, but I was already placed on a rickshaw and on my way up the hill through Chinatown to the hospital by then.
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But this thing that has landed on my chest seemed not only soft, but warm, and now that I've calmed down, I can tell that it's breathing! Oh, god, It's an animal! What kind of animals live at sea? Could it have been trapped on board all this time? Had it come over on the tender? But wait, it was purring, and I felt sharp pin-like or maybe tack-like pricks in my chest. I raised my head and a cat was staring down at me, looking as though he, or she, had just conquered me.
Being startled I rolled from the cabin cabin top giving this stray cat just enough time to dig its rear paws into my belly and leap to the deck in front of me. The cat sat there, looking up at me, tail sweeping back and forth across the deck. I just look down at this cat, hands on my hips bewildered. How could this be? This cat looked exactly like my recently murdered father's cat, Dirty Socks. His father had an identical cat of the same name.
Could the all be from a long line of mousers?
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXAB- Completed- I Was In Your Apartment Today
I Was in Your Apartment Today...
Batman vs. Kirk (wip)
I still wonder why we were so fixated on Batman rather than St Trek. They both premiered in 1966 and ran about three seasons. Batman showed on Wednesdays and Thursdays at 7:30 pm on ABC, and Star Trek was on Thursdays at 8:30 pm on NBC (though it was moved to Friday for its third and final season).
Batman, a kid's show, featured campy humor, cartoon action inserts, and well-known guest stars. It lured the adults to the screen, making it a wholesome and popular family show for the home from work late working class T.V. tray dinner crowd. It was truly comic book stuff and coming to life in our living rooms. We kids just ate it up.
Suddenly we were no longer playing War or Cowboys and Indians, now we were outsmarting the villains of Gotham from our Batcave in Batmobiles and climbing walls with Bat-ropes. Girls were included in the roles of Batgirl or Cat Woman, or any number of overly outfitted feminine roles they might dance into later in the seventies.
Star Trek, on the other hand, was science fiction and aired on Thursdays at 8:30 for an entire hour. It totally eclipsed our critical sleep period. This was a huge conflict for our parents. Our aunts, who doubled as our moms, and my mom who doubled as your aunt, were both very strict on us, their firstborns! They couldn't allow us to stay up past eight. It would set a bad example for the four younger kids.
But then, in its third and final season of Star Trek, a miracle occurred. Star Trek was moved to Friday night!
On these occasions my dad would more often than not grant one of his less occasional, only to make his point clear and to show her that could override his wife's steadfast rules by granting his authoritative permission.
He would say simply, between a bite of a Colonel Sanders chicken breast, "Since it's not a school night, honey" and the man would let me stay up and watch Star Trek.
My sister would join us, we'd make popcorn, and I'd mix a wine cooler for my mom at the start of the show, maybe another at the middle commercial. My cousin Allen began transporting over on Fridays. He would transport over. He became an extended family for the weekend
But can you imagine Cousin Al advancing from Batman to Spock, and maybe me to Captain Kirk? Well, I'm sure we would have worked something out by now.
Keep these coordinates locked, and beam us up when ready.
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ARTICAL- Pop's POW Story by Damon Perry- (research apparently intact)
>> I was in your apartment today
Derived from my original poem, "Homecoming"-April 12, 2014."
I was in your apartment today. Everything was gone, except for a few crumpled receipts, six wire coat hangers, and a hairball you missed behind the bedroom door.
You left this unit much cleaner than the last one you vacated, taking time to fill most of the nail holes, but using toothpaste rather than Spackle. I know because of the faint minty scent as I entered the unit and the taste when I licked my finger to sample a small patch. I'm certain your manager will overlook this old trick. He likes you.
The kitchen and bathroom nearly sparkled, shining brighter than any realtor's open house restroom I've visited, even those prestigious homes near the foothills. You're going to make huge points with that manager!
I was impressed that you accomplished so much with a single vacation day. You must be expecting to get your full security deposit back. I imagine you will get every penny back providing the toothpaste isn't a problem
I never would have guessed your plans to move. Last night, as I watched you sleep, carefully sipping my Diet Coke, gazing at you from the bedroom doorway. I love to watch you sleep, curled up snug and sound, your bunny rabbit snore.
Or watching you dry yourself after a shower, flipping your hair forward, drying and wrapping it over your head, so soft, with a yellow or blue towel, damping your face and breasts, wrapping yourself. You are so beautiful!
Even when watching you from beyond your window. The special times we've shared. Me longing from afar, you seeming so near, my yearning heart tugging
me back, so close to calling. Even nights when boyfriends call, I know, I learn, I'll be ready.
Soon again we'll share our secret nights. Time will slip along and you will settle into someplace new and comfortable, and as soon as the coast is clear, I'll be there, close by, still never close enough, just as I have been all these years.
But for now, I suffer and miss you reading in bed, the blue flicker of the walls when you watch TV. Most of all I'll miss your personal parties, the sweet sounds you make in your own private pleasure
I will not suffer for long. I know you will not move too far from work where I see you every morning, and I'll be back home with you just as soon as you hand me your new key and ask me to care for your cat.
Damon- a silly thanks for much =Santa fe
>> Damon- a silly thanks for much
Sorry to tell you this, but these things just keep happening. Year after year, almost annually, on more or less the same date and day of every year. It's not necessarily on the same day of the week, but always the same month on the Julian calendar. I'm not sure about the Canadian calendar or how it applies to the Hindu, Aztek, or other ancient calendars, or even any of those other pre-BC calendars like those Mesopotamia or Suma- Sum- Sumerian or Akkadian ones (neither of which has any connection to any Star War episode), or countries that write squiggly-like words (other than our own 'script') or upside down, or up and down letter languages. And as for anything that I can't personally read or write, well you will have to google those for yourself as to how you can wish happy birthday yourself.
Once confirmed your history, background, likes, dislikes, etc. will be easily available to you to create your own Facebook or Healthcare account. A whole new world will open to you, and open for others to discover everything about you. It won't be long before A.I. will send this stuff for me or you anyway (aka the movie Her, starring the great actor Joaquin Phoenix, who is a surprise to success due to his cleft lip, a trait we share. But then I don't think that's for you as we become parodies of ourselves year by year. We work through our lives only to wind up as stodgy anachronisms just far enough behind whatever becomes present to wonder how we'll manage to keep up at all. Kids over nine will never wonder in awe.
I do know that you like to celebrate your birthday in any neat and ostentatious way available, surrounded by as many friends and family as you can fit in your iPhone lens for that carefully framed group shot. The best I can do this time around is send this card I bought at Albertson's of a cat reaching its paw out towards an old Royal Manual typewriter and asking in caption 'Where is the send button on this thing..."
Love you, give your other a hug, copy us the picture.
dalton
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PARACOSMIC REVIEW July 5-2024 I've read it many times, but it's about time I got back to your blog. What I like about your writin...
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Derived from my original poem, "Homecoming"- April 12, 2014." I was in your apartment today. Everything was gone, except f...
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I Was in Your Apartment Today... I was in your apartment today and everything was gone. You left only a few crumpled receipts, six wire ...





